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 ## <a name="TWiki is a Web-based collaborati"></a> TWiki is a Web-based collaboration platform
 
-- A TWiki site is a easy-to-use, full-featured open communication environment:
+- A TWiki site is an easy-to-use, full-featured open communications environment:
   - people anywhere on the Web or on an intranet can meet
   - rich Web text, images, and online multimedia are easily shared
   - documents and other files can be uploaded and downloaded
-  - everything works through a regular Web browser
+  - all you need is a Web browser and any available network connection
 
 ### <a name="TWiki is a powerful Web enhancem"></a> TWiki is a powerful Web enhancement...
 
@@ -12,28 +12,29 @@
   - make adding and editing text simple _(How simple? Click on the **Edit** link at the bottom of the page...)_
   - let you find information _fast_ ([[WebSearch]])
 
-- TWiki provides an intuitive way to meet and collaborate, that aspires to the Zen ideals known as [[WabiSabi]]. It finds beauty in the imperfect and ephemeral and constantly evolving. When it comes down to it, that's all you need.
+- TWiki provides an intuitive way for people to meet and collaborate, that aspires to the Zen ideals known as [[WabiSabi]]. It finds beauty in the imperfect and ephemeral and constantly evolving. (When it comes down to it, that's all you need.)
 
 - TWiki is one of many [[WikiWikiClones]], based on Ward Cunningham's original [Wiki Wiki Web](http://c2.com/).
 
 ### <a name="&quot;TWiki&quot; stands for..."></a> "TWiki" stands for...
 
 - _Wiki wiki_ means "quick" in Hawaiian. The shuttle at Honolulu Airport is called the _wiki wiki_ bus, which is where the original Wiki web got its name.
-- _TWiki_ is short for _TakeFive Wiki_ from the name of the company where its founder worked. (It was later discovered that _Twiki_ is also the name of an AI robot that co-starred in the [_Buck Rogers..._](http://www.buck-rogers.com/) movie and TV show from 1979 - its head is in the logo.)
+- _TWiki_ is short for _TakeFive Wiki_, the name of the company where its founder worked. (It was later discovered that _Twiki_ is also the name of an AI robot that co-starred in the [_Buck Rogers..._](http://www.buck-rogers.com/) movie and TV series from 1979 - see TWiki in the logo.)
 
 ### <a name="Selected TWiki Topics..."></a> Selected TWiki Topics...
 
-- [[TWikiPages]] tells you how to do administrative things, like renaming topics.
-- [[TWikiHistory]] timelines TWiki's development.
-- [[TWikiPlannedFeatures]] lists of approved additions to future TWiki versions.
+- [[TWikiSite]] provides a basic big picture overview of the TWiki platform
+- [[TWikiPages]] is a quick and concentrated look at the TWiki core
+- [[TWikiPlannedFeatures]] lists approved additions to future TWiki versions.
 - [[TWikiEnhancementRequests]] is the place to add your new feature requests.
-- [[TWikiDocumentation]] is the complete reference manual.
+- [[TWiki Documentation|Main/WebHome]]: a compact User's Guide and an in-depth Reference Manual.
+- [[TWikiHistory]] puts TWiki development on a timeline
 - [[WikiCulture]] looks at the unique type of collaboration Wiki systems offer.
 - [[WikiReferences]] links to articles and books about collaboration and Wiki technology.
 
 > **_NOTE:_**
 >
-> If you have to log-in to us TWiki, for example, if Twiki is running on an intranet, it automatically signs new pages with your
+> If you have to log-in to usr TWiki, for example, if Twiki is running on an intranet, it automatically signs pages you edit and create with your
 >
 > [[WikiName]]
 >
@@ -51,4 +52,4 @@ TWiki<sup>TM</sup> is a trademark of [[PeterThoeny]], originator and lead develo
 - [[WelcomeGuest]] is a fast track guide to TWiki.
 - This site is powered by TWiki version **TWiki-4.1.2, Sat, 03 Mar 2007, build 13046**.
 
--- [[MikeMannix]] - 01 Dec 2001
+-- [[MikeMannix]] - 29 Dec 2001